Violet-Rage
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 04:01 PM
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Not exactly sure..
So, here's the thing. I've been writing for years. And I've been working on a few novels. One at a time of course. My latest novel is stuck. Its
about a teen girl.. well.. here's the sort-of summary :
Secrets :
have you ever kept something so big from your parents, because you were afraid of how they would react? Something that not many people know, because
you were scared? Something you even denied to yourself for a long time? You hear everyday about people getting neaten, and sometimes even killed,
because of their sexual orientation. Well, I'm one of those people. My name is April Shaw. My secret? I'm a lesbian. And this is my story.
So... anyone have any conflicts they would love to read about in a story like this? Or, if you want to read any of what I have done, let me know and
I'll post it. Thanks 
I'm me, get used to it (:
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Br0ken_Deadly
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 04:14 PM
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I want to read more now! >.<
LOL. You totally got my attention.
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 05:21 PM
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Thats actually a good idea for a story. The style you wrote it in seems to pull it off, shes normal but shes not. I'd take a crack at reading it.
Edit: 'neaten' should probably be 'beaten' though.
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
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Abeytu
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 05:52 PM
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Sounds interesting enough. Not normally my style but i'd probably try reading it as well.
Sometimes I want to break out of this vacuum but I just can’t. The demons keep calling me back into the void. I feel comfortable here..
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 06:06 PM
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I'd read it in my free time when I have some. Seems like it would be a good book :] 
"Why", you ask? "Why" is not the question. How? Now, that is a question worth examining. How could I, being born of such, uh...
conventional stock, arrive a leader of the rebellion? An escapist from a conformist world, destined to find happiness only in that which cannot be
explained? I brought you here for a reason, but unfortunately you and your sentimental minds are doing me no good! My brain is frozen. Locked! I have
to break free from this culture of mechanical reproductions and the thick encrustations dying on the surface!
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 07:54 PM
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Well,, it sounds really good & interesting =)
Want to read some more 
let me know when there's more
Xxx
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Azserkal
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posted on 17-2-2010 at 09:07 PM
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being a writer is not about perfektion, but how you feel...i am a macabre poem writer and i have been doing it for about 5 years...while right now i
have a writers block, the main thing is to always have inspiration-based on/off something you like(d) but remember novels are hard to write since you
have to do your best not to stay in third/first person alot
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Violet-Rage
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posted on 19-2-2010 at 07:21 PM
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@ Br0ken :: Thats good
@ lillieh :: yes, it should be xD but I was in school and only had a few seconds to write it. And thanks
@ Abeytu :: thanks
@ addicted :: awh thankies
@ princess :: Thanks and I will
@ everyone :: I'm thinking I may post snippets of the story, in the thread, or even whole chapters.. either message me or post here which you think
would be better. And when I do post, comments are always welcome. And I can take criticisim. No point in being a writer if you cant right? thanks everyone.
I'm me, get used to it (:
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posted on 19-2-2010 at 07:29 PM
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Hey it sounds as an interesting story...i would like to read it, I prefer reading by chapters....
well, let me know when you post more of the story!!!!
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Violet-Rage
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posted on 20-2-2010 at 01:06 AM
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@ Azerkal :; sorry I skipped you earlier . I was in a rush . But the thing about perfection is, its not reality . Nothing is ever perfect . And
nothing will ever be perfect . Its human nature to make mistakes . And everything can be improved . Weather its your writing, or someting else . And
with improvement, comes change . While many humans are afraid of change, other embrace it . Changing your style of writing, or changing a complete
part in a novel, can be difficult . Everything depends on the writers style . I know how difficult writing a novel is . I've been writing for years .
Started off with poetry, which I still do, then eventually made its way to novels . I've written a couple already . But this one is different .. Its
more personal than anything . Thank you for your opinion It was greatly
apreciated.
@ Jendayi :: Thanks for your opinion I'll be sure to let you know.
I'm me, get used to it (:
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posted on 20-2-2010 at 03:54 AM
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You don't think there's enough books about the whole "Oh I'm a homosexual" theme. You'd need something that sets it apart in some way or it will
never get picked up by a publisher.
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posted on 20-2-2010 at 04:11 AM
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I love the summery. It sounds interesting. Lol I'm writing a book myself but it's suckish. And I think I accidently took it off some anime base
thing. So I'll prolly stop writing it..Lol
If the book is ever published I'll buy it.
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ever, but it gets addicting at first.. Then, it just gets dull.."
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I think blaus would make a kinky cybersexer though 
he's just shy!
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Violet-Rage
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posted on 22-2-2010 at 09:17 PM
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@ Morpheus :: You're taking your opinion from that little snippet. Which is understandable. And honestly, there aren't many books out there like
that. I myself have only read and heard of a handful. But of all the ones that I have read, what I'm writing about myself is different. I'll post a
more in-depth summary soon.
@ yoru_kami :: Thanks
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